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©2009 =Kaz-D
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Sometimes when you are alone,
A faint breeze blows in your hair,
You turn to look, but it has gone,
And was never really there.


Words/Image: =Kaz-D

Critiques


:icondemonking1515:
Ok so let me begin by saying i love the piece. It is amazing the way u have that grass popping out so well! The photo is very strong when u 1st see it, for me it was a feeling on extreme happiness. This is why i rated impact 5. Technique i gave 4 stars for, because i believe strongly that the photo could be stronger if u took it at a different angle. The originality is amazing and is wonderfully original. The vision gets 3 and a half stars because the picture could have been clearer in the sense that the the ground and grass are rather blurry. Overall i think the piece deserves 4 stars, thank u for taking the time to add the picture to our fine art community.
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:iconcherybery:
I see several good qualities within this photo. First being the sunset. It gives the clouds in the sky a cast of not only orange but a muted purple and shades of blue-grey. In the horizon you get a wonder smooth glaze of a yellow orange from the sun setting behind a group of trees.
Second, the photographer has also caught the slight bend in the grass . Allowing the viewer to see and feel the slight breeze. None of the detail was lost in the grass as well, even with the movement of the air. The grass and the sunset colors are a wonderful contrast.
Third is the fence. The fact it is seen slightly in the background gives this a nice feel without taking anything away from the rest of the photo.
I think this is a very well done sunset photo with beautiful flow
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:iconkaz-d:
Thank you :)

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:iconjpelmen:
wonderful picture and beautiful words! :heart:
:iconmistshadow2k4:
Nice sunset! I love the little poem with it too. :D

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:iconthe3godfathersteve:
beautiful sunrise , i think

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:iconsoulseekerk9:
A very nice sunset and such beautiful words to go with it.
When you think it wasn't there alas you were in it.

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:iconpoppymix:
Perfect shade of colours XD

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:iconkardia-fractus:
HELLO!!! I've not been active lately. I expect that out of the deviations that I let build up there is going to be a lot of beautiful pieces of art, and I expect to see some beautiful work from you as usual. It's nice to be back on and I will be uploading some new stuff soon

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Sep 30, 2007, 2:29:59 AM

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