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Description
Branching out into my first sort of 'portrait' photography - feedback much appreciated! There will be a couple more uploaded soon 
Model: Shane
Model: Shane
Image size
3583x1379px 836.34 KB
Make
SONY
Model
DSLR-A550
Shutter Speed
1/400 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
300 mm
ISO Speed
1600
Date Taken
Jun 28, 2011, 7:38:28 PM
© 2011 - 2024 Kaz-D
Comments5
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I guess I'll have to repeat ~Shelagnoa because those were the points that stood out for me as well...
I really like the lighting and how it works with the monotone, as there is a sense of softness, but also a sense of profundity which increases the impact and atmosphere overall. The angle is great and I like the point of view.
My main issue is the way you have cropped this piece... I guess the bottom isn't too bad, but the top.. perhaps it would be best to use the rule of thirds there, if you know what I mean?
Other than that, not bad.
I really like the lighting and how it works with the monotone, as there is a sense of softness, but also a sense of profundity which increases the impact and atmosphere overall. The angle is great and I like the point of view.
My main issue is the way you have cropped this piece... I guess the bottom isn't too bad, but the top.. perhaps it would be best to use the rule of thirds there, if you know what I mean?
Other than that, not bad.